针对刚刚过去的托福考试,出出国老师特总结了本次托福写作机经,希望对将要参加托福考试的同学有所帮助。
综合写作
阅读:反对“禁止贩卖、购买和进口未经许可的野生动物”的法案。理由有三:
The reading opposes against the law that prohibits importing, buying and selling the non-native species in U.S.
1.如果一些家庭养了这些法律不允许的动物,还要被政府强制收回,太残忍了。People fear that their pets will be taken away by authorities.
2.要执行这个法案需要耗费大量的金钱,不划算。It is expensive to implement the law because government has to spend a lot on the study of nonnative animals.
3.这个法案太绝对了,外来物种可能不会对本土物种的造成威胁。例如,比利时兔子Belgian rabbits不能在美国寒冷的东北部生存。Belgian rabbits are non-native species, but it will not establish in the northeast of U.S because the weather is really cold所以法案没必要对所有的地方一视同仁地严苛禁止贩卖这些动物。
听力:反驳阅读观点
1.该法案并没有针对已经饲养这些动物的家庭,只是强调了在法律生效以后禁止贩卖、购买和进口。如果他们之前已经饲养了,可以继续养着。只是不能再买新的这种动物了,批判了阅读第一点的无理性。 (Argument does not make sense) One person has tropical fish; the fish will not be taken away, but the owner cannot buy the non-native tropical fish in the future.
2.这个法案虽然会耗费一些金钱,比起挽回的损失而言是划算的,因为非本土物种会造成更大的破坏,损失是不可估计的。例如,在佛罗里达洲Florida,有一种外来的大蟒蛇Burmese Python,这种长达5米的生物已经造成了当地物种的大量灭绝,当局不得不投入大量人力物力来清理这种大蟒蛇。由此可以看出物种灭绝的后果不是可以用金钱来衡量的,所以花在这个法案上的钱是值得的。
3.对所有地区采用一致的法规,一视同仁的做法是对的。同样以巴西兔子为例,虽然它在北方野外只能短暂存活,但足以将所携带的病毒传染给本地兔子,同时造成了其他本地物种的大量死亡。所以此法案对所有地区做出同样的要求是合理的。Belgian rabbits carry Myxoma virus which can cause mass extinction of native rabbits with the considerable collateral damage to other native species.
独立写作
Agree or disagree: The best way to improve quality of education is to increase the teachers salaries. To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on professors' salaries.
是否同意:提高教育质量的最佳方式是增加大学教师工资/提高老师工资。
写作思路 同意:
1.提高教师工资带来的好处是无容置疑的一一教师会有更多的动力,同时也会吸引更优秀的教师到学校任教。satisfactory payment serves as a effective engine driving people to strive for more excellent performance in their career.
2.提高老师薪酬,减少了教师经济上的压力,养家糊口的压力等,会有更多的精力保证教学效果。
3.诚然,在其他方面投入也可以帮助提升教师的教学水平,例如:培训的机会、promote教研和教材、聘用更优秀的教授。 但是作为直接教授学生的老师们,涨工资无疑带来的效果是最直接、明显的。这样可以更好的带动教学质量的上升。
Whether the best way to enhance the education's quality is to improve teachers' salaries? Most people claim that to improve the finance of teachers doesn't contribute to increase quality of education because there are other ways to promote the educational quality. However, as far as l'm concerned, it is a much effective way to improve the quality of education through makes the teachers' budget sufficiently.
First and foremost, satisfactory payment could serve as an effective engine driving people to strive for more excellent performance in their career. On one hand, the sense of satisfaction that obtained from decent salary as well as respectable status could eliminate their tiredness and then their enthusiasm of working could be boosted. On the other hand, it is universally acknowledged that there is furious competition in modem society which ensues from job with adequate payment. And in order to maintain their position and even procure promotion in the near future, people must be overtime working and high concentration to achieve greater efforts. According to a recent survey that conducted by the Ministry of Education, there are 78.3 percent of teachers think that to make the higher salary is the most effective way to increase their quality on teaching. Therefore, to increase payment is an effective engine lead teachers to do better.
In addition, high payment could decrease their burden on the life of economic, and then it is also good for the teacher's health, because high payment enable them to have less pressure from family, and it's also unnecessary for them to find excess jobs to hold their family, such as home-teaching. Thus. they could have much more time on doing exercise. For example, they could use their free time on jogging. It is an excellent way for them to decrease the possibility of suffering to physical disorders, like obesity, hypertension and diabetes. So, teachers should have a good health condition to face their works, and then the quality of teaching would also increase a lot. Consequently, higher payment also contributes to teachers' physical fitness.
Last but not least, there is another way to improve the teachers' quality as well, such as to train them for a while. There is no denying the fact that to train teachers is also a quickly method to improve their teaching levels, because teachers could learn more skills in the courses, such as managing skills, leading skills and teaching skills. But it is also have some influence negatively, for example, when teachers took training class, they might don't have enough time to work, and then their work experience would lose. Thus, to train teachers for a while is not the best way to improve the quality of education.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that to increase salary is the best way to improve quality of education.(475 words)
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