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考生写作必备:常见病句分析(二)
时间:2011/6/21
    11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they
     want further development.
  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want
     further development.
  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big
     money.
  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring
     them big  money.
  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
  16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork, students must grasp
     some technical skills.
  改进: Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work, students must learn some
      practical skills.
  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
  19. They cannot think clearly.
  改进: They cannot think straight.
  20. Money can improve their living standard.
  改进: Money can improve their life.

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