雅思考试技巧真不少。在语言功底比较扎实的基础上，对这些技巧作专门的研究，并运用到平时的练习中去，是得到理想雅思分数的必经之路。如果你不打好基础，也不懂答题的技巧、方法，那雅思考试的确比较难。如果你具备了一定的语言功底，同时熟悉了相应的技巧，得到7.5也不是什么奢望。下面就让我们一起来看看出出国老师为考生整理的雅思考试技巧。
出出国老师最近批改学生习作:
题目News media has become influential to our lives. Some people think that is a positive development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
News media has become an indispensable part of our daily life, and influenced our lives in many aspects. At this circumstance, it is crucial to find out whether this development is positive or negative. This essay will discuss this in graphic detail.
原文
News media has become an indispensable part of our daily life, and influenced our lives in many aspects.
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News media has become an indispensable part of our daily life, and has been influencing our lives in many aspects.
说明
and 后面加一个has因为前面的那个助动词隔得太远了
has influenced是强调过去的行为对现在造成的影响 改成完成进行式 感觉上好一点 因为这个影响 还在继续进行中
原文
At this circumstance, it is crucial to find out whether this development is positive or negative. This essay will discuss this in graphic detail.
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In this circumstance, it is crucial to find out whether this development is positive or negative. This essay will discuss this in detail.
说明
At this circumstance 把它放到google.com里面 没有搜出结果 可以确定没有这个用法
graphic detail 一般是指带有图象的生动 形象细节
On the one hand, news media, indeed, exert positive effect on our lives. To begin with, by watching the news on television, individuals knows what happened around the world, making them knowledgeable and providing them topics when they communicate with others. It is also beneficial to promote the culture mutual understanding and avoid culture confliction if people are on the trip in other countries. Furthermore, mews media will cover the latest policy made by the government. If we acquire some economic policy, we could predict the economy trend and invest in profitable field, in which way we may avoid losses. Besides, the news media plays an alarming role. When the news coverage is inundated with natural disasters and the death induced by these disasters, people’s awareness of environment protection would be raised.
原文
On the one hand, news media, indeed, exert positive effect on our lives.
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On the one hand, news media, indeed, exerts positive effects on our lives.
说明
news media 不可数名词 谓语加s
effects 多方面的影响 加s
原文
To begin with, by watching the news on television, individuals knows what happened around the world, making them knowledgeable and providing them topics when they communicate with others.
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To begin with, by watching the news on television, individuals know what happened around the world, thus becoming more knowledgeable about other cultures and having more topics to talk about when travelling abroad. (根据你下一句的意思作这样修改 否则下面的if people are on the trip in other countries和news media 有什么关系呢)
说明
主题句的主语是news media 下面的顺延这个方面作主语 感觉上好一点 就是用news on television 来作主语 而不是用individuals作主语----当然不是非要这样
individuals knows---- individuals know主谓不一致
making them knowledgeable…… 这部分的主语是什么呢 此处没有用对 如果前面是news media 可以这样用
原文
Furthermore, mews media will cover the latest policy made by the government. If we acquire some economic policy, we could predict the economy trend and invest in profitable field, in which way we may avoid losses.
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Furthermore, mews media always covers the latest policies made by the government. If we acquire these policies, we can predict the economy trend and invest in profitable fields.
说明
could 语气没有can 肯定
in which way we may avoid losses 完全是多余的
原文
Besides, the news media plays an alarming role. When the news coverage is inundated with natural disasters and the death induced by these disasters, people’s awareness of environment protection would be raised.
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Besides, news media plays an alarming role. When the news coverage is inundated with natural disasters and the death caused by these disasters, people’s awareness of environment protection would be raised.
说明
the news media 没有特指
However, we should not overlook its detrimental influence upon our lives. For one thing, some news outlets exaggerate things to attract audience’s attention and there are also fake news reported on the media, all of which might mislead our judgment and make us go astray. For another thing, the bad news affords us a sense of anxiety and unsafety. Specifically, we never pass a single day without news about crimes, accidents or suicides which render us disappointed and impel us to develop a negative attitude towards life.
原文
However, we should not overlook its detrimental influence upon our lives.
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However, we should not overlook its detrimental influences upon our lives.
说明
Influence多方面的影响 用复数
原文
For one thing, some news outlets exaggerate things to attract audience’s attention and there are also fake news reported on the media, all of which might mislead our judgment and make us go astray.
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For one thing, some news tells of exaggerated things to attract audience’s attention and there is also fake news, which might be misleading and make us go astray.
说明
Outlet 基本都作名词用
Exaggerate 动词
there is news不可数
reported on the media 多余
all of多余
mislead 后面接人
原文
For another thing, the bad news affords us a sense of anxiety and unsafety. Specifically, we never pass a single day without news about crimes, accidents or suicides which render us disappointed and impel us to develop a negative attitude towards life.
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For another thing, the bad news can bring us a sense of anxiety and unsafety. Specifically, we never pass a single day without hearing about crimes, accidents or suicides, which render us disappointed and impel us to develop a negative attitude towards life.
说明
Afford?
hearing about 强调一个被动的意思
Based on the above discussion, despite that there are drawbacks about the news media, its advantages prevail over its disadvantages; Therefore, the news media is a positive development as a whole.
原文
Based on the above discussion, despite that there are drawbacks about the news media, its advantages prevail over its disadvantages; Therefore, the news media is a positive development as a whole.
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Based on the above discussion, despite that there are drawbacks about news media, its advantages prevail over its disadvantages. Therefore, news media is a positive development as a whole.
说明
news media 非特指
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